Well, I liked the original story, although there are about 350 some odd webpages and blogs that have that same story, just the names are different.

I was also concerned about the way you replaced your name with that of the father. I've seen my share of attempts at covering up rape before, but this one had to be the lamest. I mean, aren't you 5'11" and about 170 pounds?
I think you revealed too much of yourself in your story.

But, honestly, can't you just hate yourself enough to shoot yourself in the head, now that your girlfriend has left you for someone obviously more mentally stable?


I think so.